jargon113's movie Reviews on Newgrounds

[Desert Storm Trailer]

pretty good for a trailer

good for a trailer i liked tha animation how when he was in the tomb and you could see all the hyroglyphics and all.. love the detail.. sound was pretty good but it could of been longer other than that it looked alright.

[SSAM #1]

great

well first of all it was great, music, animation, everythign went smoothly story loved how it was set up for a second. you need to be a director/writer. anyways here's the bad things.. the animation reminded me too much of southpark the characters and such.. and i really needed to be able to toggle the quality, because some parts my machine couldnt handle.. like when it switched scenes the fps dropped a bit but overall i scored it a 5 well done this kind of animation might make it to the frontpage!

[WHAT IS LOCK?]

god damnit

iam tired of this stupid shit especially the clock bullshit it's so fucking annoying AAAAAAAAHHHHHHHHH!!!!!!!!!!

Limited3dition responds:

DAmn your negative dont let mommy see that yopur typing like that on cyber space

[Kevitto's Untitled 1]

ok

well it was alright i liked how you introduced the color but it had no plot no story nothing and sound wasnt the greatest, so if you thought a little harder, put a story into it maybe a background alot more color,shades it wont get blammed next time..

[Depression.]

nice

it's something i can relate to... something i lived through not too long ago. this flash is very well depicted of depression i liked the background ambience, music.. nice keep up the good work.

[Surface]

nice

one of he better serious flash animations ive seen in a while.. all my five belong to you.. keep it up i would like to see a series..

[Infinite Dreams]

great

i loved it, for a first flash it shows you have some talent. the music put a great touch to it and made it even better. keep making flash's and iam sure your gonna make it to the front page.

Mloriendell responds:

thanks, I really appreciate the optimism and I do hope to make the front page

[Ball Factory]

?

what the hell was the meaning of this? had a nice story and what not but i couldnt understand what it was relating to.